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February 19, 2016
4:31 am

tedisvet

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Hello everyone!

I have recently been thinking of starting something on YouTube, not a clue if I am actually going to continue doing it, but for now I am exploring what needs to be done and if it is something I'd be able to do properly. If I am going to do it I want to publish quality videos and therefor I'd be nice to have the opinion of the folk.

If you're reading this topic, could you take the time to watch my 7 second intro and give me some feedback on it (whatever it may be!).

Video 1 (Faster one)

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=csU6tgOKwVA

Video 2 (Same speed as the one in the dropbox link (no music&shorter) )

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jcKJsA-Gug8

Since I am not allowed to use any music that I do not own the rights to, I have made a dropbox link with an alternative intro, it is slightly different, but with the music you might understand a bit better what I am going for.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/pcpr0eilt0yorag/IntroTest%2BMusic.avi?dl=0

Thanks in advance for anyone that takes the time to help me with this!

To get the motivation going I'll give anyone that watches the video & leaves a bit of feedback down below 1k shillings

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February 21, 2016
12:00 pm

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Looks great!

For music, so long as you don't make money off the video and so long as you give proper credit (and don't mind an ad), look for music that is "fair use." I recommend video game remixes.

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February 22, 2016
2:20 pm

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Thanks for the reply, I forgot that there was fair use music, thanks alot! That will make my search alot easier! 😀

EDIT:

Thanks to LWK and some good searching I found an awesome Royalty Free music. (I can use it for youtube as long as I state the website of the creator)

I made a quick edit to the existing video. The music and the old video did not sync atleast a small bit, so I made a few quick cuts to make it kinda blend, just so you guys get the idea. I'd like to hear the initial thought when you're done watching the intro. Once again I will reward 1k for every person that leaves feedback.

LWK, I'll pay you 1k as soon as I see you online!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r63aLD1SwXY

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February 23, 2016
5:31 pm

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I think, it looks good. You should replace the word "Tutorial" with the title of your episode after some seconds. The music fits well. However, the real challenge is to make the video after the intro. 😉 I hope, you will stay that enthusiastic with your project. Good luck!

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February 23, 2016
6:11 pm

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Pauli90 said
I think, it looks good. You should replace the word "Tutorial" with the title of your episode after some seconds. The music fits well. However, the real challenge is to make the video after the intro. 😉 I hope, you will stay that enthusiastic with your project. Good luck!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jkC6XMpH8Xs

Replaced, for now with "Subject" but ofcrouse that will be the title in the future.

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February 26, 2016
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Yep, that's good. 😉

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February 29, 2016
4:54 pm

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One more video, and I think this is the last? I like the way it is now. Still feedback is appreciated!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YM727_NKKto

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March 4, 2016
1:39 pm

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Looks cool! Super chic, I like da colors, but the first time I watched it, I sort of missed the title because the flash was so brief. I know that the subject will probably also be the in the title of the video, plus whatever you say when it actually starts, so not really a big deal, but that was just my initial reaction.